deuceloosely wrote:Gaelstrom wrote:Gah! Why oh why didn't the 'Now yer thinkin' with yer Dipstick, Jimmy!' commercial come out two months ago!! Totally would have hijacked that...
The header text reads to this effect:
HARUHI: "BASEBALL IS GOD'S GIFT TO MAN!"
Watch First Baseball Game From Closed Space!
...IF camera crew returns.
Four lines would have been too cramped and people don't like reading huge blocks of text. Some might not get it all before it changes again. But yeah, I rendered again after all those little typos came in last and then reupped and resent. We'll see at Otakon if he picked up the right one, although I made quite clear in the message that this is the "final" draft and is the version which should be used..
And the "dipstick" commercial could be quite dirty if taken the right way...
Good choice, the Scout dialogue was just an inside joke, so you chose really well
The anime joke is more important considering the audience.
For future reference next year though, let's use this as an example of things that are very important for you to bring up with us. Not as much this text, but in general, for any change. I believe it'll save you a lot of time and hassle if whenever we post a requested change, you respond to each at least briefly regardless of how long a post you make. This isn't an imageboard, if a person does a tl;dr about their own work, then they miss their change chance
For example, I felt like you were ignoring my requests for a while since you never acknowledged them, and all you needed to write is "okay, so you want this, this, this, and this, right?" This way, you can say "okay, so would you be okay with this change?" or "this text doesn't fit in the area, is 'this text' an okay alternative?" or "I don't understand this clip, did any of you understand it?" to clear things up and prevent yourself redundancies in changes and rendering. Things like that can lead to potential video removal or, better yet, adjustment based on suggestions if a video isn't hitting very hard or could be timed better. Communication like that I can guarantee you will save you a lot of time and stress in the long run. Talking it out on the boards with us saves you the time of doing a change and hours of rendering that will end up being useless.
retired: 2021 
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