The Rivals (feed back wanted)

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The Rivals (feed back wanted)

Post by DTBKing » Wed Oct 14, 2009 3:24 pm



check it, dbz with a generic story. hope you like it regardless. feed back wanted good and bad. preferably the bad ones so i know whats wrong with it to be better later on. 3 months old
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Re: The Rivals (feed back wanted)

Post by Enigma » Wed Oct 14, 2009 5:59 pm

3/5 I still kinda like it.

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Re: The Rivals (feed back wanted)

Post by Rider4Z » Wed Oct 14, 2009 6:37 pm

MOAR!! 5/5

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worth keeping :up: i'll leave an op for this

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Re: The Rivals (feed back wanted)

Post by DTBKing » Wed Oct 14, 2009 7:28 pm

Rider4Z wrote:MOAR!! 5/5

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worth keeping :up: i'll leave an op for this
thank you. i really appreciate it =]
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Re: The Rivals (feed back wanted)

Post by Begi » Wed Oct 14, 2009 7:49 pm

dtb...nvm T_T

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Re: The Rivals (feed back wanted)

Post by DTBKing » Wed Oct 14, 2009 8:08 pm

Begi wrote:dtb...nvm T_T
whats wrong, what i do?
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Re: The Rivals (feed back wanted)

Post by Prodigi » Wed Oct 14, 2009 8:53 pm

If you extend the video from it's very short runtime into a full length video and give it a solid conclusion instead of the lackluster one it currently has I will endorse this in my signature as one of my favourite videos this year.

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Re: The Rivals (feed back wanted)

Post by DTBKing » Wed Oct 14, 2009 8:58 pm

Prodigi wrote:If you extend the video from it's very short runtime into a full length video and give it a solid conclusion instead of the lackluster one it currently has I will endorse this in my signature as one of my favourite videos this year.
unforunitly, that was the actually end of the song and i cut the verses short to keep it from running long. this is the finish project. sorry
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Re: The Rivals (feed back wanted)

Post by Rider4Z » Wed Oct 14, 2009 9:03 pm

for the style of editing i thought the length was really good. besides, everyone "knows the ending" to dbz anyway.

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