Ghost in the Machine (Best Instrumental 2010 VCAs? :o...)

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Re: Ghost in the Machine (Best Instrumental 2010 VCAs? :o...)

Postby Pwolf » Sun Mar 08, 2009 1:11 pm

I didn't like it that much. It was kind of disorientating and hard to follow. which could be because i'm feeling sick. Might have to rewatch it when i'm not already feeling disorientated, lol.
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Re: Ghost in the Machine (Best Instrumental 2010 VCAs? :o...)

Postby Kristyrat » Sun Mar 08, 2009 1:13 pm

Cool, nifty and smooth. However, it's something we've seen so many times before, and I think you could have tried to spice it up a little to give us something new. Some of the editing felt a little slow, or plodding, but for the most part it was right on.

I would have loved it if you'd pursued the scene relationships at about 1:50, where you've got the dude tossing something (keys?) and then Jue catches her sword. The link between the two clips was reaaaally cool, and I think you could have done some fucking slick stuff if you'd tried to do that more elsewhere in the video. Just a thought, would have spiced it up a little more for me. But either way, well done. :up:

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Re: Ghost in the Machine (Best Instrumental 2010 VCAs? :o...)

Postby CastielTheFallen » Sun Mar 08, 2009 2:14 pm

I absolutely fucking LOVED the editing, but I think the effect choices really drug the video down for me. The color scheme over the whole thing and the TV simulator type effects just felt bland and gaudy.

Editing - 5/5
Video as a whole - 2.5/5
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Re: Best Instrumental 2010

Postby Dark-Krystal » Sun Mar 08, 2009 4:39 pm

Brad wrote:My favorite AMV of yours. Friggin awesome.

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Re: Ghost in the Machine (Best Instrumental 2010 VCAs? :o...)

Postby nZen » Sun Mar 08, 2009 10:57 pm

i really liked the editing and scene selections, great job :up:
kept me watching it without stopping :D

and that really was an awesome Outro :shock:
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Re: Ghost in the Machine (Best Instrumental 2010 VCAs? :o...)

Postby Nya-chan Production » Sun Mar 08, 2009 11:30 pm

I would like to ask which parts were used, since there are parts of AM which I don't like much ^^;;
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Re: Ghost in the Machine (Best Instrumental 2010 VCAs? :o...)

Postby Niotex » Mon Mar 09, 2009 3:02 am

Its sad when I can tell exactly which external motion blur you used.. Overall a smooth and slick video but as stated before it seems more of the same. And while there are some subtle things that are completely new to you. And some of which are relatively new to us in general. None of it seems to have jumped out and grabbed me.

Still solid but nothing batshit insane.
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Re: Ghost in the Machine (Best Instrumental 2010 VCAs? :o...)

Postby OropherZero » Mon Mar 09, 2009 3:14 am

editting was really good, so nice job on scene selections and placement :up: However I really didn't like it, just a personal thing since I neither like The Animatrix nor high amounts of external synch and rapid cuts (there were about 3 very clever internal synch moments tho), I can definitely see the editting merits =P
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Re: Ghost in the Machine (Best Instrumental 2010 VCAs? :o...)

Postby Magnus » Mon Mar 09, 2009 10:55 am

Really liked this. Tight, funky, solid.
Good job :up:
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Re: Ghost in the Machine (Best Instrumental 2010 VCAs? :o...)

Postby MimS » Mon Mar 09, 2009 12:41 pm

My favourite Animatrix video...
What else?
Very good job! :up:
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Re: Ghost in the Machine (Best Instrumental 2010 VCAs? :o...)

Postby Darklydone » Mon Mar 09, 2009 2:18 pm

Great stuff. As random as it was I saw alot of connected scenes that were very well done. Clips taken from one part of the animatrix film but ended with a clip from another part of the film. 01:50 as an example, one of many of these scenes I really enjoyed. :up: :up:
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Re: Ghost in the Machine (Best Instrumental 2010 VCAs? :o...)

Postby Senka_fr » Mon Mar 09, 2009 2:32 pm

That was a good amv even if I find that animatrix amv are all very similar...

Oh and I like the tv-simulator effect :) and good job to Brad for the credits.

8/10 :up:
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Re: Ghost in the Machine (Best Instrumental 2010 VCAs? :o...)

Postby Vanity » Mon Mar 09, 2009 3:07 pm

:sweat: I thought it was oki...nothing special except Brads awsome intro and outro =]. But overall great job!
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Re: Ghost in the Machine (Best Instrumental 2010 VCAs? :o...)

Postby Milk Or Life! » Mon Mar 09, 2009 3:43 pm

well it was edited pretty well :up: but it didn't work on me feels like watching the same thing...and this tv-stimulator/scanline/whatever it's called ;P annoyed me like hell :(, still pretty decent job.
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Re: Ghost in the Machine (Best Instrumental 2010 VCAs? :o...)

Postby MycathatesyouAMV » Mon Mar 09, 2009 6:12 pm

Not digging the tv like effects and some of the feathering. Some of the editing was pretty good but the scenes felt way more random than they needed to be.
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