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by Emotive » Mon May 19, 2008 1:24 pm
Didn't really get much from this, at many points it seemed like you were going for something cool but couldn't convey it right at all (grunge: done? where did that come from?). It had obvious flow problems and lots of imperfections in general, but I did find it entertaining at parts.
It actually started out pretty well, continued with some iffy synching by keyframing brightness adjustments at the masks, showed something promising at the 20second mark (excluding the mediocre keying) and had pretty much lost its flow at the 30 second mark. It did regain it at certain parts where you actually cleared out what you were synching to, but it grew to be pretty boring by the time it was halfway over.
A lot of effect compositions just looked random and totally disconnected to the video, like the "vector-digital noise-grunge-raw" thing at 01:27, what was that about anyway? Effects were used decently at some parts but just seemed disconnected at others, overall nothing that really catches the eye though.
It was overall quite more entertaining than whatever else I had watched by you but it could have been far better in many aspects. Before anything, your flow needs improvement.
5.7/10
