[Your Lie In April] AMV - Dreamlike

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[Your Lie In April] AMV - Dreamlike

Post by Aevision » Fri Mar 25, 2016 12:29 pm





My third AMV, April's coming, hope you enjoy it and feedback would be appreciated! :)

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Re: [Your Lie In April] AMV - Dreamlike

Post by Kireblue » Fri Mar 25, 2016 5:44 pm

This video has a pretty good mood and some nice use of effects. I do feel that you went overboard with the color alterations at times and caused the scenes to look washed out and low quality. I also feel that a lot of your crossfades, blurs and transitions needed to be just a little bit longer in order to ease in and feel less abrupt and jarring. Lastly, I feel that you should have eased up a bit on how much you sped up your clips. You shouldn't really speed up your clips to the point where they look unnatural and become obvious that they were sped up.

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Re: [Your Lie In April] AMV - Dreamlike

Post by Shinzui IT » Fri Mar 25, 2016 11:14 pm

Not bad. I agree with kire and a little more time into this would have pulled me in
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Re: [Your Lie In April] AMV - Dreamlike

Post by Aevision » Sat Mar 26, 2016 3:05 am

kireblue wrote:This video has a pretty good mood and some nice use of effects.
Thanks for the thorough feedback on what I should improve on and keep in mind for my next AMV's, really appreciated. :)

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Re: [Your Lie In April] AMV - Dreamlike

Post by post-it » Sat Mar 26, 2016 7:47 pm

Ah Yes, the Long-Petal Foot-Stool; I remember it well.

Never actually seen this anime but, you've done a nice job with conveying its message - Bravo ^__^

THx

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