Damn You Are Beautiful

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Pangimation
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Damn You Are Beautiful

Post by Pangimation » Wed Jul 29, 2015 11:30 am



Youtube Link: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dtnurwG7EPs
Would be nice to get some tips for the future since I just started to make AMV´s :D

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Mol
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Re: Damn You Are Beautiful

Post by Mol » Sat Aug 08, 2015 1:28 pm

You picked a simplistic idea with fairly simple music which isnt a bad idea for first amvs (easier to get around it). You picked a fine and fairly easy theme to follow, but messed it up a little with difffrent scenes. I feel editing could follow music more (strings/beats piano/stuff) which is 1st priority alongside interesting ideas imo. So yea try to be more creative with ideas and work on you editing techniques mostly. Good luck&HF ! O:
Still better than that MMO.
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Re: Damn You Are Beautiful

Post by Lapskaus » Sun Aug 09, 2015 6:51 am

What that other guy said, AND please please please check your video for ghost frames before releasing them!
I've lost count somewhere but your AMV got a lot of single frames that belong to the next scene in the anime. These clips in your editing software are just 1 frame too long.
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