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Game: Start! Fight! Complete!

Post by PrincessMareep » Sun Jul 05, 2015 12:55 pm

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Category: Action
Anime: Sword Art Online (TV)
Song: Little Faster
Artist: There for Tomorrow
Creator: PrincessMareep (FullMetal Hearts Studios)

Wow this is my first time announcing a video! I'm nervous, haha.. :oops:

This is the first full amv I've edited in about 3 years. I'm really glad I was able to get over my editor's block and let my muse flow through me with this one. I'm glad to be able to share this amv with you all and hopefully get some feedback! Thank you! <3
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Re: Game: Start! Fight! Complete!

Post by Kireblue » Mon Jul 06, 2015 4:52 pm

your video could use a bit more flow, but not bad. My advice to you is to try to keep up the movement and momentum of your clips. There were a bunch of times where you had a scene with a lot of movement in it, but then the next scene hardly had any at all. And so, if you have your movemement be a little more consistent, your scenes will flow into each other better.
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Re: Game: Start! Fight! Complete!

Post by PrincessMareep » Mon Jul 06, 2015 6:26 pm

Alright, I'll most def be more mindful of that! I suppose I got a little too caught up trying to tell a story, haha. My bad!

Thank you for your criticism though it's highly appreciated! :up:
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