I'd have to say at first when I saw it I thought that the camera was pretty interesting. Though in the video the story wasn't really that clear and it needs to have a fluid flow into it (Like water). When you did the flare and transitions it killed the mood each time it was put in and at 0:44 where you have that crack, snap (whatever you call it) effect I have to say it killed the mood and looked random. When you enter in an effect like that there needs to be a bigger plot so when you enter in those transitions and effects it will mean something.
I have to say that the masking was entered in at the wrong time (i feels like) and looked very random like you wanted to enter in a random mask just to change the scene. When using the mask to change the scene maybe adding camera movements to transition into the mask to keep the flow going and keep it more relaxing.
Lastly for the flow... The flow felt like it kept getting interrupted by effects and the transitions. What would have helped if you've payed more attention to that and not just the effects and transitions. Once that happens it would be an even greater quality.
Overall it was not my cup of tea... Should work more on the pacing and masking... Not too bad, keep it up!
