AMV - Party (new guy over here)

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_Pamplo
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AMV - Party (new guy over here)

Post by _Pamplo » Mon Jul 22, 2013 9:14 pm

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Hi...im new xD, just want to share my first amv, there is a lot of really good work in this forum, so i hope i can receive some reviews to improve... its in the general directory of the page too...

AMV - Party
Song - Mashup-Germany - Top Of The Pops 2011
ANIME - Haruhi, Ben-to, Boku wa tomodachi sukanai, Working, Angel Beats, Rosario and vampire (no spoilers)
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Re: AMV - Party (new guy over here)

Post by lynit » Wed Jul 24, 2013 5:41 am

Word of advice, always remember to include a link to your video so people are able to find it more easily. Using the vidid button is the best way to do this!



Edit: some interesting ideas but the intro was a definite clusterfuck. i'm not too sure if you edited it or not because it sharply contrasts the rest of the video. the idea of using text mixed with the visuals was interesting but started to seem really stale after a while. beat sync seemed off in some parts. it seems as if you lost interest in the video halfway through. definitely could use more work but keep at it! :)
<Stirspeare> Otohiko: You guys sure love dongs.
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Re: AMV - Party (new guy over here)

Post by _Pamplo » Wed Jul 24, 2013 11:40 am

my fault, i forgot completely the link of the video, mmm, yes, i guess you are right about the intro.
I made that part because i wanted to make an intro, but honestly, i didnt have any ideas about what to do. xD
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