You shouldn't be so rough on the newbies, Animated san. xD Though, Animated is right about adding water marks, and announcing a beta on here. We will be more interested in your amv if you put enough effort to complete it. I can understand that you're eager to know what everyone thinks about it, but just have patients, and get it done.
As for what I think, well... yea it just seems like a typical amv any new editor would make. Random fighting scenes+CC+watermark = newbie in vegas.

we all went through this phase... well, i sorta kept most of it to my self. I don't think your bad at all, you just have to work on your syncing the most. Though, with that said, you still have a long way to go in pretty much all aspects of editing, as in, scene selection, theme, and most importantly a original editing style. Just try to do something different. Pick a song that isn't being abused by other editors as much, and pair it with a source that you think would go nicely with it. It doesn't have to be your favorite anime always, you just have to be open to all sources out there. And please, a word of advice, don't just throw effects into your work if they aren't necessary. I would highly suggest doing raw editing first, and work on your scene selection, flow and syncing. Effects can be very powerful when used right, but they can also ruin a perfectly good amv when they are just thrown in there for the sake of having effects. Hope this clears up most of the things for you. Just have fun with it, and don't stress about gaining subs. I'm sure it does motivate you, but at the end of the day, we all edit videos for the fun of it and to, of course, express our artistic side I suppose.. O_o.