The White Knight Approaches

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The White Knight Approaches

Postby NotReallyHere » Thu Jun 06, 2013 12:10 pm

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Greetings all you people who are reading this!

This is my entry for the AMV competition that was held at Anime(con) 2013 in The Hague. It was the first time I did any kind of masking so it probably could be better but I think it turned out quite well. The contest had 19 contestants battling it out for an Editor's choice award and an Audience award. I got 7th and 2nd place in those categories respectively. Which makes it the highest ranking AMV I've ever made. ^^

Anyway, I hope you enjoy and if you've got anything constructive you want to say, feel free to speak up. :)
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Re: The White Knight Approaches

Postby imp » Fri Jun 07, 2013 3:32 am

So, here are my thoughts:

nice lipsync, story is ok thought the scene selection is a bit random here and there.
Your masks can be better, maybe a bit more blur at the edge(?), they also seem to have different opacity, or at least the background makes it look that way.
The pacing can be a lot better, you're going perfect in the beginning, but when the music goes up at 0:44 the video has no impact. Almost no internal sync makes it feel even slower.
The end is really building up but at 60% of the screen nothing's happening (only some movement at the 3 screens you put there)
Music goes on during the credits, but isn't long enough for the whole credits :/

See you at abunai ^.-
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