The overlay kaleido scope and transitions (the stock ones at the beginning) were pretty nasty but beyond that the video wasn't half bad. It would've been nice to see you do a bit more with the color effects like maybe some rough rotos around the characters to draw attention to them or something. As the others said, the effects and overlays you used were too strong, to the point that they drew more attention than the video itself. Bit more flow and a couple adjustments and this would've been pretty damn good.