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Desde mi Cielo - TritioAFB

Post by TritioAFB » Mon Apr 01, 2013 11:39 am

It's the first time I'm making this, so there's the new video already:

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Desde mi Cielo or From my Heaven as you wish to call it

Old entry will be kept in the thread in case you haven't watched it:
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So long time not posting something here, let's get started today :up:
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Re: Live or Die - TritioAFB

Post by Shinzui IT » Mon Apr 01, 2013 3:35 pm

nice one :up: :up:
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Re: Live or Die - TritioAFB

Post by TritioAFB » Fri Apr 05, 2013 9:21 am

Thanks man :up:
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Re: Live or Die - TritioAFB

Post by ibabrak » Fri Apr 05, 2013 1:01 pm

There were some scenes that were little out of place imo but overall it was a very nice and solid amv. Good job man :up:
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Re: Live or Die - TritioAFB

Post by -Kyros- » Sat Apr 06, 2013 3:13 pm

Not bad
I think at some points you should focus on better synch (at some points I think you could do more) , and the final part I was not very convinced
however, you did a good job and put me curious to watch this series
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Re: Live or Die - TritioAFB

Post by TritioAFB » Sun Apr 07, 2013 10:32 pm

I was getting obsessed with the synch in the first betas, then relax in the finals :bear:

But yes, I'll keep it in mind for the future proyects. Thanks for the comments
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Re: Live or Die - TritioAFB

Post by Hikado95 » Mon Apr 08, 2013 6:25 pm

not bad :) :up: :up:

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Re: Live or Die - TritioAFB

Post by TritioAFB » Thu Apr 11, 2013 11:17 am

Gracias pana :dino:
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Re: Live or Die - TritioAFB

Post by Animated » Fri Apr 12, 2013 12:47 pm

or ? I think I'll prefer the first one for obvious reasons :P

So, my opinion on this. Good editing (I think I've seen better from you, doc!) but what bothered me the most is the linear storyline you showed us. Even though I couldn't understand the story of the video at all, it seemed like a collage of some anime sequences which were edited in a very unfitting action way. For example, the part at the lake with the boy and the girl: they were only looking each other and I was prepared for a massive fight with the kind of editing you used! Same goes with the wedding part and the boys fighting in the forest: you gave it so much tension, where there was none needed. Also, abrupt ending was abrupt :( Maybe it's just me that I don't like videos with only one anime used, but I believe this could have been much better - some clever ideas here and there, like the japanese text, but overally it was just average :nose: Take out your medical knives and show us what you can! :awesome:
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Re: Live or Die - TritioAFB

Post by CacoVenom » Sat Apr 13, 2013 11:08 pm

go tritio, well you know good work, yao

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