Animated wrote:what bothered me the most is the linear storyline you showed us. Even though I couldn't understand the story of the video at all, it seemed like a collage of some anime sequences which were edited in a very unfitting action way.
Pretty much agree with this. It's not a majorly bad thing though or I would have mentioned during beta-testing. My biggest gripe personally was when you tried to show too many linear scenes at once, making the pacing really fast for a supposedly slower verse sequence. Sometimes you gotta let the music and the viewer fill in the blanks themselves to make things more interesting. That being said, too abstract and people will get lost






