Project Daisōtō: A Tribute to King Bradley

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Project Daisōtō: A Tribute to King Bradley

Postby Lynkthebadman » Fri Aug 10, 2012 9:55 am

Video: Project Daisōtō: A Tribute to King Bradley
Category: Action
Anime: Fullmetal Alchemist Brotherhood
Song: Warrior
Artist: Disturbed
Creator: Lynkthebadman

Hello
Just wanted to say im new here and this is my second Attempt at an AMV ever. Would love to know what you guys think any constructive criticism would be greatly appreciated please and thank you in advance
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Joined: 10 Aug 2012

Re: Project Daisōtō: A Tribute to King Bradley

Postby sholin360 » Sat Aug 11, 2012 8:34 am

Well this is quite good to be your second. Well, but one of the issue is that lots of clips are stretched out too long, try to make a effect or a transition at a beat or something ^^. Also another issue is lip flapping (I just learnt this word xD), where the character's mouths are moving but a lot of times they aren't matching with the lyrics etc. There were some parts that matched quite well like at 2:43 : DDD Another thing is that the speed of the battle didn't match with the song in many cases. 1:26 was a good match but after that... not so much. You should look at Corsair's tutorial on quick masks on Youtube (search corsairamv quick masks), this can make your amv a lot smoother. You seemed to be trying to match the beats with the battle at times, and that's great but as I said, in many cases it didn't fit. Sorry if I sound harsh ^^. Although you have room for improvement (I'm still a noob though), this is your 2nd amv so overall, it wasn't that bad :D.
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Re: Project Daisōtō: A Tribute to King Bradley

Postby Lynkthebadman » Sun Aug 12, 2012 4:06 am

Thanks For Your Reply ill looking to all u have said and make the necessary adjustments in my next attempt
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Joined: 10 Aug 2012

Re: Project Daisōtō: A Tribute to King Bradley

Postby Lynkthebadman » Sun Aug 12, 2012 4:07 am

Thanks For Your Reply ill looking to all u have said and make the necessary adjustments in my next attempt
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