Centurione wrote:Not bad, but I think it's generally too static. Music is not as slow as your video. You should have turned the pacing up. And actually, have you edited the part at the end at all? Because it looks like you've put this pretty epilogue scene from Byousoku 5 cm and just left it as it was. Also, I didn't feel much connection between the lyrics and what was happening on the screen.
Anyway, that was quite nice and enjoyable. Keep on improving!
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