TEKnician wrote:Your "bump" effect you placed over chihiro during the first half was slow and felt like you were just trying to zoom in.
Ijexis wrote:At the beginning where the the clips "bump" to the beat, those felt unnecessary and off, just more so distracting than anything.
TEKnician wrote:The inadvertent cut between color and grayscale was...unnecessary?
Ijexis wrote:When it randomly switches to grayscale, that was a bit jarring and did not quite fit.
TEKnician wrote:The glowing transition looked broken (as in the first clip cut to black and the second clip fades in.
TEKnician wrote:...the way she was portrayed in this story just felt like a montage of emo scenes.
TEKnician wrote:I would like to offer assistance with your future AMVs should you have a question or two or would like someone to Beta-test your videos!
peppy_heppy wrote:Well, what I intended was to simulate a heartbeat effect (the scene when they meet for the first time), but I will take your advice into account; maybe I should use some other effect to go with the beat.
peppy_heppy wrote:I used this effect to paralell certain echoing phrases and to emphasize on the feeling of emptiness like Chihiro's life is all black and white and a bit of color in-between. However, maybe you're right it was a bit off and perphaps instead I could use fast flashes of other scenes to go with the echos.
peppy_heppy wrote:Thank you both TEKnician and Ijexis for the recommendations, support and friendliness! Quoted Image converted to link:
http://www.cute-factor.com/images/smilies/onion/875328cc.gif Next I plan on making a compilation AMV. I'll see how it goes.
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