On My Own (ef ~a tale of melodies~)

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On My Own (ef ~a tale of melodies~)

Post by peppy_heppy » Sat Jan 21, 2012 11:36 am

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Video: On My Own
Category: Drama, Character Profile, Serious
Anime: ef ~a tale of melodies~
Song: On My Own
Artist: Maria Ilieva (Bulgarian singer)
Creator: peppy_heppy

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My second AMV. A big thank you once again for the feedback, which encouraged me to go on with the AMV-making. I realized I had a number of ideas waiting to be ralized, so I'll be making more and uploading them in the future. Any comments are greatly appreciated, I'd be happy if you share ideas for improvements.

The song is by Bulgarian singer Maria Ilieva and is devoted to the victims of human trafficking. It's from a Bulgarian film on the subect, telling the story of such a girl.
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Re: On My Own (ef ~a tale of melodies~)

Post by KingRoyMustang » Sat Jan 21, 2012 11:40 am

That was really good.
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Re: On My Own (ef ~a tale of melodies~)

Post by peppy_heppy » Sat Jan 21, 2012 1:51 pm

KingRoyMustang wrote:That was really good.
Glad u like it ^^
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Re: On My Own (ef ~a tale of melodies~)

Post by Centurione » Sat Jan 21, 2012 3:12 pm

I'm sorry, but I didn't enjoy this video much.
Of course the fact I don't fancy this kind of music may have some influence on my general opinion.
I found scenes too long. Cuts should follow the music more, as for me, and I think transitions didn't fit well. I also find scene selection quite random.
But, this is your second AMV, so keep on doing stuff! :D

I'm sorry, I'm not really the right person to criticise works of others as I am not any kind of good editor (yet!).
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Re: On My Own (ef ~a tale of melodies~)

Post by peppy_heppy » Sat Jan 21, 2012 3:37 pm

Centurione wrote:I'm sorry, but I didn't enjoy this video much.
Of course the fact I don't fancy this kind of music may have some influence on my general opinion.
I found scenes too long. Cuts should follow the music more, as for me, and I think transitions didn't fit well. I also find scene selection quite random.
But, this is your second AMV, so keep on doing stuff! :D

I'm sorry, I'm not really the right person to criticise works of others as I am not any kind of good editor (yet!).
Thank you for the feedback. I appreciate it. :wink:
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