I want to be helpful, and I think I can be very much since I'm actually a newbie myself and am learning (mostly) everything in the guides for the first time. So I've posted a few things here (and in the thread on General Video), but I'm not sure I'm being optimally helpful.
So I have a few questions that I hope will help me (and others) help you better:
1) What kind of feedback are you looking for primarily? Simple editing (typos, grammar, broken links)? Technical content (when something is wrong or incomplete)? Logical content (if we think something needs to be explained better or more thouroughly)? Flow (how the sections interrelate, work together, and are ordered)? Etc.
2) Who is your intended primary audience? Are you focusing more on newbies trying to make their first video, or veterans to need a reference document? Is it meants to be read straight through, or skipping around reading just the parts you need? Is it supposed to be a thourough guide on everything about everything, or just the parts you really need to know to make an AMV?
3) What is the difference between this thread, and the thread about The Guide in the General Video section? I just want to make sure I post the right thing in the right place.
I didn't see these already answered elsewhere, but if they are then just bonk me on the head and give me a nice sturdy shove in the right direction.