OK With that out of the way...
The mix of the song I used was an edited version that I made myself from Vinyl and CD source. In fact if you listen closely you can hear the record scratches at the start of the video.
As far as I know there's no Vocal Dub version of Shine that I've seen. It's not on the Vinyl nor any of the CDs, or the single.
And if you have a problem with my lyric matching... well sucks to be you, I guess. I have an old journal entry about what the whole plot of the video was supposed to be, although it looks like nobody got my personal interpretation.