First of all congratulations to Lopez and Niwa who did well in this and the past round. However I'm a bit surprised of the result cause everybody put me second in their predictions. I hope to do well in the next round, and good luck to all!
Ok so, compared to some other of your works I can see less bad effetcs. I think that you need to focus more on the anime/song combination, which I think it isn't very good. Also, the pacing is absent in some points. There are things you can improve, therefore engage more!